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About Me Premium Member Wannabe Novelist Bret M. Ware17/United Kingdom Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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Pass the Poem.

Sun Nov 22, 2009, 9:42 AM
  • Mood: Fear
I froze when I saw his hands where mine should be; caressing
Like a winter morning, he was cold. Like a wind whistling
Cold he was, but every touch left a streak of glaring heat upon her skin.
November bites, December gnaws; neither match the dully dead
emotion that begins to rise, a taste of blood and bile
The writhing stench of deeds best left in a dark past
blinds me as it controls with a disembodying numbness.
Self control being a lost memory
Lost like the life that once was there.
In his still-open eyes I see the emptiness inside of me
and inside of me is where i hide, nothing is there, no one to find me; my place of hiding.
Shut away, behind lock - there is no key - my guilt, my consciousness
My rage running hot, but frozen. All is frozen, still, unreal.
But... it is real ... What have I done??
I stare through the flickering pictures, it flashes again across my eyes,
Painted portraits, memories, held back, too long denied
Shattered before this mirror I stand, willing the want away
He used to call me his bright red star; now, I will swallow him whole.

Written by us all, hosted by =VertigoArt. The last line is my own. :)

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=th3krimzon1 5 hours 2 minutes ago
Hey there.:D

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
　 ／l、
ﾞ（ﾟ､ ｡ ７ Kitteh!
　l、ﾞ ~ヽ
　じしf_, )ノ
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*SirBret 4 hours 47 minutes ago
Hello there, nice to meet you; I see you're on Will's pass the poem event, too. Great idea, isn't it?

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I entered literary life as a meteor, and I shall leave it like a thunderbolt.

- Guy de Maupassant
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=th3krimzon1 4 hours 53 seconds ago
Yes, it is, I was part of the first one he did, seems like almost a year ago now. :)

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
　 ／l、
ﾞ（ﾟ､ ｡ ７ Kitteh!
　l、ﾞ ~ヽ
　じしf_, )ノ
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~i-can-only-hope 3 days 2 hours ago
Thank you lots and lots and lots for the fave!
Mucho appreciated!
XD

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i'm the cupcake your lunch lady warned you about
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~AdvisorC202 3 days 4 hours ago
Blank slate?

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Igne natura rennavator integra.....
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*SirBret 1 day 14 hours ago
Just for now, while I figure out how I can make my page interesting and cool again. How are you, Advisor?

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I entered literary life as a meteor, and I shall leave it like a thunderbolt.

- Guy de Maupassant
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~AdvisorC202 1 day 10 hours ago
I see.

Read my journal.

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Igne natura rennavator integra.....
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=Hyperionic-Xmissions 4 days 2 hours ago
many thanks for the watch!
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~HeavensXGames 5 days 4 hours ago
Zhoom!

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Most gods throw dice, but Fate plays chess, and you don't find out til too late that he's been playing with two queens all along.
~Terry Pratchett
Now watch closely, everyone. I'm going to show you how to kill a god.
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*thisdemonblack 6 days 1 hour ago
thanks for the watch. i'm in a slump right now so you might not see much new stuff coming your way but i might take this opportunity to revise older poems. i would totally dig it if you offered some perspectives on some older stuff in my gallery, particularly [link] if you had any thoughts on it. but ya, thanks again. hope not to disappoint!
j.

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the world is flat; &so are we (everyone a kerouac)
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